What’s a Lawyer Doing Writing for Kids? By Robin Newman

It gives me great pleasure to feature another one of my author friends who has a debut book releasing this month.  ROBIN NEWMAN’S  Chapter Book, The Case of the Missing Carrot Cake, A Wilcox and Griswold Mystery, is being released by CRESTON BOOKS to starred reviews.   Here’s Robin to tell us about her path to publication:

I’ve often been asked how I ended up writing children’s books, and for that matter, a mystery series. “After all, you’re a lawyer, right?”

It’s a good question. A very good question.

Yes, I am a lawyer. When I was practicing, I was what you would call a “disgruntled lawyer.” That’s disgruntled with a capital D. Not an unfamiliar term to many lawyers.

One day, my mom gave me some good advice.                    

Kids already LOVE the book...

Kids already LOVE the book…

 

“Quit,” she said.

“What did you say?” I said. At the time, I was on my lunch break at a pay phone on a congested street in lower Manhattan. My hearing has never been great, but I knew I must have been imagining our conversation.

“Can you please repeat what you just said? I think we have a bad connection.”

“Quit. We’ll figure it out.”

I did. Surprisingly, my mom had a plan. I had no other plan but to eat my way through the chocolate éclair section at my local bakery. (It wasn’t a pretty sight.)

“Call Barry,” she said. He was one of my mom’s neighbors with a family law practice. He also taught family law.

I made the call. He needed help with some research projects. So, I wrote a bunch of memos, and then he asked me to write the content for his mediation website. It was this project that got me my job as a legal editor. When I was pregnant, I decided to freelance, and around that time, I began writing short stories. My twin suggested I enter the Symphony Space Selected Shorts contest. I did. I lost. Year after year. Rinse and repeat. But I was writing.

My husband suggested I take a writing class. I signed up for a children’s fiction class and as soon as I walked in the classroom, I knew I had found my people.

Then, during one Christmas holiday, I noticed my niece yawning while she was opening her presents. It was an eye opening moment. She was bored. That’s when I decided to give my nieces and nephews more meaningful gifts.

I wrote them stories. One of those stories was about the Double Trouble Banana Split Detective Agency on the hunt for a missing birthday cake. The detectives were two monkeys working their beat from a tree house. All of the characters were named after, or inspired by, members of my family.

I brought a version of this story to my writing workshop. Everyone hated the monkeys. Got it! The monkeys had to go. So what kind of detectives would kids find engaging? It somehow crossed my mind, wouldn’t it be interesting if the detectives, the enforcers of justice, were the smallest animals on a farm? Little by little, the enforcers became mice, and at some point I started to play around with the idea of making them like the FBI. But what kind of enforcement would be needed on a farm? And that’s when it hit me. Food enforcement. They would be MFIs, Missing Food Investigators. Hence, the creation of The Case of the Missing Carrot Cake, A Wilcox and Griswold Mystery.      carrotcake_cover03

At first, the story was a picture book. But my word counts were off the charts. They were around 1200-1600 words. I knew an editor would be hyperventilating if he/she saw the word counts. Playing with the line spacing, margins, fonts, etc. wouldn’t help. (Although I can’t say I didn’t think of it. )

But I had no idea how to cut that many words and still write a mystery that was laden with clues, flushed out suspects, red herrings, etc. Then I went to one of the NJ SCBWI (www.njscbwi.org) conferences. I had a one-on-one critique with the great, Sudipta Bardhan-Quallen. She told me, I’m paraphrasing a tad, but this is the gist of the conversation.

“This is not a picture book.”

Once again, I thought I was hearing things.

“This is a chapter book. Eight short chapters and you’re done.”

It was as if a light bulb went off. I started rewriting it as an early chapter book. Back to my critique group for what must have been a gazillion rewrites before I sent it out. In 2012, I met my wonderful, stupendous agent, Liza Fleissig, from the Liza Royce Agency, who coincidentally is also Darlene’s agent. I did a number of rewrites for Liza, and then a number of rewrites for Creston Books. My amazing, awesome editor and publisher, Marissa Moss, suggested I add more food metaphors, hype up the humor, leave more red herrings, and tighten the story. Her comments were spot on.

So, in a nutshell, that’s pretty much how I ended up writing a mystery series. And I have to say, it is hands up and down the absolute best job in the universe!

Watch the trailer for THE CASE OF THE MISSING CARROT CAKE: https://vimeo.com/123638587  

Raised in New York and Paris, Robin is a graduate of Bryn Mawr College and the City University of New York School of Law. She’s been a practicing attorney and legal editor, but she prefers to write about witches, mice, pigs, and peacocks.

She is the author of The Case of the Missing Carrot Cake, A Wilcox & Griswold Mystery, illustrated by Deborah Zemke (Creston Books, Spring 2015), about two hardboiled mouse detectives working their beat from a shoebox at the back of Farmer Ed’s barn. They are MFIs, Missing Food Investigators, and on their seminal case, they’re on the hunt for Miss Rabbit’s missing carrot cake. (Note: The names of the animals have been changed to protect the good guys.)  Other books include Hildie Bitterpickles Needs Her Sleep, illustrated by Chris Ewald (Creston Books, Spring 2016) and The Case of the Poached Egg, A Wilcox & Griswold Mystery (Creston Books, Fall 2016).  

You can visit Robin at www.robinnewmanbooks.com.

Now here’s the interesting part of the post. If you’d like a chance to win a FREE copy of The Case of the Missing Carrot Cake, A Wilcox & Griswold Mystery, illustrated by Deborah Zemke (Creston Books, Spring 2015), please post a comment below. If you’d like to increase your chances of winning, please also tweet about this post on Twitter, share it on Facebook, and reblog it. For each additional “shout out,” an extra piece of paper will be added to the magic sorting hat with your name on it. Don’t miss out on this once in a lifetime opportunity! And don’t forget to let Darlene know how many “shout out’s you did so she can add the correct number to the mix. Deadline is April 20, 2015.

May the best blog reader win!

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36 thoughts on “What’s a Lawyer Doing Writing for Kids? By Robin Newman

  1. This sounds like a fun book. I look forward to reading it so I can learn about the chapter book format. Thank you, Robin and Darlene for the inspiration.

  2. I’m so glad Robin’s mom persuaded her to quit…and then one thing led to another…and the world now has The Case of the Missing Carrot Cake! Congratulations to Robin on her excellent debut book!

  3. “The Case of the Missing Carrot Cake” made me want to read the entire book. The whimsy of the two chickens cracked me up.

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  5. Thank you Robin for sharing your amazing journey made possible through your experience as an attorney and the work you did for Barry. I look forward to reading The Case of the Missing Carrot Cake. Just may need to share your thoughts with our son James who is an attorney for the City of San Antonio. All the best to you and Darlene.
    ~Suzy Leopold
    P. S. I tweeted, post on FB and shared on my WP.

  6. Suzy, Best wishes to your son in San Antonio. When I was a legal editor, I used to edit energy and environmental titles. So, I spent a good amount of time in Texas. Hands down, I think San Antonio was the friendliest city I visited. p.s. If you watch the very last scene in Erin Brockovich, you can see one of the titles I edited. 🙂

    • Your kind comment is appreciated, Robin. I agree with you about SA. There is such a down home kind of feeling that we appreciated while living in the Great State of Texas. The Midwest is where we need to be on the Illinois Prairie.

    • p.p.s. I thought it was the last scene so I double checked to make sure. It’s hard to tell which treatises are on the bookcase. (In any event, at the time, my managing editor had us pull out our old binders so that they could be used as props in the film. They weren’t the new binders b/c they wanted them to be accurate for the period when the case was litigated.) Anyway, a tad bit of trivia. My claim to fame! 🙂

  7. May I have a drum roll please….THE WINNER of a signed copy of WILCOX AND GRISWOLD: THE CASE OF THE MISSING CARROT CAKE goes to…Marlaina Gray! Congratulations and thanks for being part of the contest.

  8. Very interesting post. I had no idea Robin is a lawyer. Impressive. More impressive (i’m guessing from above [post), is her writing. I have a copy of The Case of the Missing Carrot Cake to read and review. I will be linking to this post. Congratulations, Robin. (I mean, I hope it’s congratulations, seeing I have yet to post your review–you never know, it could go either way). 🙂 !

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